看得懂,不代表是自然英文。
My pressure is very big.
I very like listening to music.
Although studying is tiring, but I cannot give up.
Let me can relax.
這些句子多半不是「每個字都錯」,而是中文的語序、句型與表達邏輯被直接搬過去了。
不要從第一個中文字開始翻。先問:英文要用什麼 VERB?
「我的壓力很大」真正要講的是:某件事造成壓力,或我感到有壓力。
可以選 put, feel, cause, make,而不是硬翻「壓力/很/大」。
Schoolwork puts me under pressure. / I feel stressed when...
Schoolwork puts me under a great deal of pressure.
I really enjoy listening to music.
Although studying is tiring, I cannot give up.
Listening to music helps me relax.
stress → stressful → stressed;relax → relaxation → relaxing → relaxed。不要只有一個中文字,卻不知道英文可以換詞性、換句型。
把這句中文改成自然英文。
功課一多,我就很有壓力。
先不要翻「功課/一多/我/就/很/有壓力」。先回答:什麼造成壓力?你要用哪個英文 VERB?
When I have too much homework, I feel stressed. / A heavy workload puts me under a lot of pressure.
把「字對字」改成「意對意」,作文才會真的開始像英文。
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- 中式英文 Before / After
- 中文意思 → 英文 VERB → 句型
- 壓力主題完整範文